Once there was a girl with nothing to hide.
Her angel and demon right by her side.
If you took a look you'd read her like an open book,
did you know she cried in the mornings and suffered at night
did you know she lied and died a little inside?
She was a happy girl, one with many faces
some were joyful, some were bright,
If you knew death was at her door
would you run to her and cry
would you at least
say Good
Bye?
Whoa. Very deep. I love how you did that that reverse triangle formation with the words. Was that intentional?
ReplyDeleteYes and no. At first it wasn't intentional. Then I saw a shape and I was like oh better make the sentences shorter.
ReplyDeleteTo be honest I don't really know what it means I was just going with the flow and trying to rhyme and when I was done I was like :o it makes no sense yet I feel like it should haha